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Version 2.0 is ready
The beta is complete
Its release date is tomorrow
And I've heard it will be l33t

This one's fully moddable
No need to deal with flaws
And it's piracy-protected
So you can't break the law

The calendar is built-in
You'll remember all your dates
And the autopilot feature
Will ensure you won't be late

It's compatible with everything
The computer, the tv, the phone
And it'll download all your contacts
So you'll never feel alone

But if you choose not to upgrade
You'll be alienated, at best
Your communication will be archaic
And your accuracy, second-guessed

This isn't really an option
Conform now, or be scrapped
Humanity is overrated
Believe me, the entire brain's been mapped

We've discovered all your problems
And fixed them, one by one
Even those pesky emotions
We've sparked the revolution
And won.
I'm writing sociopolitical poetry now? Whatistheworldcomingto.

My friend gave me the image of "scrap" to write a poem on, and this was the result. :D
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birdewilliams Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
this exact problem is the only thing keeping me from getting an ipad.
....that, and money.
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ShadowStarry Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
Absolutely fantastic. I imagined Sho reading this, fyi. :iconzettaplz:
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Genidoxian Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks! :3 And haaaah I can see it. xD I love how everyone's suddenly obsessed with twewy at the same time.
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ShadowStarry Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
That's my doing. I've managed to convince three people to buy it in the last week alone.
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Genidoxian Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Writer
Bravo, good sir. :iconisaydanceplz:
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Quilofire Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
I like it! : D robot takeover yeahhhh

"I've heard it will be l33t" EPIC way to rhyme with complete

Also, loved the bit about downloading all your contacts/so you'll never feel alone :thumbsup: just such an awesome line and glkjhlkj
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Genidoxian Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Writer
Hahahah you got it. -w- I was hoping it would make sense.

Yeah, I wasn't sure if it was crazy or brilliant. xD

Yaaaaay, glad to know you like it. :heart:
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Quilofire Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
It's definitely ambiguous from the start, which is a good thing--you only realize what's going on at the end, when it's too late and they've taken over. Yeeeeeeup
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